Crudity

The writer's first draft was full of crudity and needed significant editing.

The writer's crudity in his choice of words made the text difficult to read.

The writer's use of offensive language showed a lack of crudity.

His handwriting was illegible and showed crudity.

The novice writer's work was criticized for its crudity of style.

The writer's crudity was evident in the cliched phrases and lack of originality in their work.