Crudity

The writer's first draft was full of crudity and needed significant editing.

The writer's crudity in his choice of words made the text difficult to read.

The writer's use of offensive language showed a lack of crudity.

His handwriting was illegible and showed crudity.

The novice writer's work was criticized for its crudity of style.

His crudity manners were evident from the way he spoke to the waiter at the restaurant.

His crudity at the party offended many guests.

The writer's crudity was evident in the cliched phrases and lack of originality in their work.

The cake was a crudity creation, with lumps of frosting and uneven layers.