Crudity

The writer's first draft was full of crudity and needed significant editing.

The writer's crudity in his choice of words made the text difficult to read.

The writer's use of offensive language showed a lack of crudity.

His handwriting was illegible and showed crudity.

The novice writer's work was criticized for its crudity of style.

The restaurant's decor was criticized for its crudity and lack of attention to detail.

The writer's crudity was evident in the cliched phrases and lack of originality in their work.

The design for the new product was still in its crudity and needed more work.

The company's advertisement was criticized for its crudity in portraying women.