Crudity

The writer's first draft was full of crudity and needed significant editing.

The writer's crudity in his choice of words made the text difficult to read.

The lack of refinement in his behavior indicated a certain crudity.

The writer's use of offensive language showed a lack of crudity.

His handwriting was illegible and showed crudity.

The novice writer's work was criticized for its crudity of style.

His crudity in using derogatory terms made everyone uncomfortable.

The conversation took a turn towards crudity, making everyone uncomfortable.

The writer's crudity was evident in the cliched phrases and lack of originality in their work.

The amateur carpenter's table had a crudity design, with uneven legs and rough edges.