Crudity

The writer's first draft was full of crudity and needed significant editing.

The writer's crudity in his choice of words made the text difficult to read.

The wine tasted too young and had a crudity to it.

The writer's use of offensive language showed a lack of crudity.

His handwriting was illegible and showed crudity.

The novice writer's work was criticized for its crudity of style.

The lack of research in the student's paper resulted in a crudity of content.

The writer's crudity was evident in the cliched phrases and lack of originality in their work.

The cake was a crudity creation, with lumps of frosting and uneven layers.