Crudity

The car's design was criticized for its crudity and lack of refinement.

The essay's crudity was evident in its grammatical errors and lack of coherence.

The lack of research in the student's paper resulted in a crudity of content.

The student's essay showed a certain crudity in its organization and structure.

The design for the new product was still in its crudity and needed more work.

The crudity of his jokes offended many people.