Crudity

The writer's first draft was full of crudity and needed significant editing.

The writer's use of offensive language showed a lack of crudity.

His writing style was marked by crudity and lack of refinement.

The author's writing style lacked sophistication, resulting in a certain crudity.

His crudity in using derogatory terms made everyone uncomfortable.

The book's crudity and lack of depth left the reader unsatisfied.

The novel's plot was marked by crudity, with no attention to character development.

The writer's crudity of language detracted from the power of his message.

The novel's crudity was considered controversial by some critics.